It makes sense.

by Fluffy Cotton   Feb 22, 2005


I watched the shadow of the sun
and in it i saw you
i felt the icy chill of flames
you brought me solace too
i swam the ocean of the sky
and you beside me swam
i picked an orange from the grass
and with it you made jam

you improve my life
my every single dream
the moments in the day
because of you, they gleme
you fix my broken soul
and weld my shattered dreams
you help to make my twisted life
much better then it seems

I stand in chilly summer days
and you your jacket lend
this crystal clear and blurry life
your words inspire to blend
My shiny eyes are dimming
and you can make them shine
when i own all i've lost
i know that you're still mine

you improve my life
my every single dream
the moments in the day
because of you, they gleme
you fix my broken soul
and weld my shattered dreams
you help to make my twisted life
much better then it seems

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Groff

    Your poems are awesome! Great Job

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ lovely with excellent rhyme
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit