Comments : Before I Had a Friend

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I REALLY LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS 5

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Isnt it great how a friend can make you feel like you are needed... great poem...xox Sherrie

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very nice.It had a good flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    you did well. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Most of the rhymes aren't very flowing...Some of them are good. The poem's like a piece of coal being compacted...Someday it will be a diamond, with the right work it will gleam...But for now it's just fuel for the fire.

  • Aww. This poem made me smile. I’m sure quite a few can relate to it which is always a bonus with poetry. It has a nice ending as well. Please write more ones like this that make people smile.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    this poem was good...awesome job

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    It had kind of an uneven flow but that's ok in the end. I like this one cause it shows that without atleast one good friend you won't get anywhere in life. Good job. 5/5 kilman

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    it shows the importnce of friendship in someones life how they can make a huge impact on your feelings and thoughts and how they can change someone. it had a great message but it was a little weak in areas, keep working!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ thanks for the comment~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is cool because you put yourself in somebodies shoes and wrote a really emotional piece about it. great job the flow wasn't bad..good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    Yeah, friends are the best...I enoyed your poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    This is my favorite poem that i have read of yours so far.. it was very sweet of you to do that for your friend and im glad see met such a good friend like you great job 10/5 lol xox take care x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Another excellent poem!
    your friend must be lucky to have someone who cares about her that much! :D
    well done
    ~*MaRy*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse Ray

    Powerful poem. Made your point crystal clear. And also I loved the way you canceled the actions from the first half of the poem with:

    "So I no longer mope,
    I no longer sigh,
    I no longer cry,
    I no longer moan,
    I'm no longer alone."

    And still made it rhyme. Once again, very powerful.