A Broken Mirror

by Hard2Heal   Feb 23, 2005


** I didn't write this, but I thought it was so great that I just really wanted to share it with you guys, and I didn't really know how else to do it, so please don't report me for plagiarism**

A broken mirror.
A distorted face.
A shattered heart.
A clear distaste.
A fallen tear.
A reddened eye.
A down-turned mouth.
A year gone by.
A loaded gun.
A finished fear.
A bloodied wall.
A broken mirror.

** I liked it a lot, and I would appreciate it if you commented on how you liked it, thank you **

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  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    That was awesome,.. the flow was absolutely unmatched thru the whole poem from beginning to finish.. i wopnt critique as it's not yours but good read.. pZ

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Whoever wrote it, did really good. Thanx for putting that up for us to enjoy. If you get the chance, could you please check out my new poem “You just Don’t know me”. It would be great if you could comment and rate it, please do. Thank you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    so.. its only because i like it if you dont, thats too bad for you.. and im sorry

  • 19 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Excuse me " Hey Steve " but i didnt even write this so get off my case

  • 19 years ago

    by cuttingsherpleasuredeathishergame

    interesting

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