so sad pain and sorrow linked into each line very good work this is awsome

loved it, thanks for your comments :) *hugs

hey I really love your nickname by the way. And I loved your poem.. another one I can relate to. Please read my poems sometime!

Loved it.... its also sad...makes me think of so many things of my past....nice work!

take care!!

This is my favorite part ::

Still do you know how much I miss your voice?
I miss it's quiet tone, it's all to familiar sound.
Your singing, dancing and clowning around.
I miss getting your messages to ask of my day.
"Don't worry" you'd say. "It'll be OK."
I miss dreaming about the future together.
I miss someone telling me to believe in forever.
What I would give to see the smile on your face.
I wish once more to be held in your love's embrace.
If you only knew how many times I wanted to call
Pick up the phone and talk about it all.
How many letters have I wanted to send.

ALL dat!!!!!!^ absolutely lovely piece!!

keep up the good work. i really like that poem

that is so sad and beautiful >5/5<
xxxChristinaxxx

another good poem, keep it up xxx

you have a very good way with words. great poem