great poem! i love it! seriously this is written really well! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

amazing poem!!

I loved it.. every stanza every word..

"My tears are the rain
my blood is a rose
a knife is my pain
an abandoned house is my soul"

^^ That is true talent.. 5/5

*> : PainOfOne

the first stanza is perfect!! I'm in love with it...best damn dark poem I've read in a while!! very impressed!! -5!

keep in touch!

With love,
Heather.

you should stop saying that its bad, everyone loves this poem! You have talent hun, keep on writing this kinda beautiful and very good poems. 5/5 and no less.
SatuzKa

That was not bad at all hun!!
wow...god so true..i'm not sure if you were serious about having those dreams, but i have them too..
chin up hun, thanks for the comment xoxo

Gd

A really nice expressing of feelings. It really gives a feeling of despair. The flow is nice and so are the rhymes. a 5/5