My Tears

by rachyBBY   Feb 25, 2005


My tears could make a puddle
As much as I cried over you
They keep on streaming down my face
I don't know what to do

My tears could make a lake
Because of how much you made me cry
I promised myself I'd never weep
Over some stupid guy

My tears could make a river
A rivr that's ice cold
A river that holds no life
A river that's worn down and old

My tears could form a sea
Caused by all your deceitful lies
I can't handle anymore of your nonsense
You always ignore my cries

My tears could form an ocean
Caused by your unloving looks
This can't be what love should feel like
It's nothing like in the books

My tears could flood a city
My tears could drown a state
My tears could cover the whole world
My tears of broken trust and hate.

Rachel Crombie--2//25//05

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shantelle

    This is really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    Good poem xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    hey dat is how i felt at 1 point wen i found out d lad id been wiv on and off 4 5yrs was going out wiv my best m8! IT HURT!!!

    keep writin and plz read and comment on my poems if u get chance xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Monique

    it's really good. you did an amazing job. keep up the good work.

    PS: check out some of my poems and comment please?!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    Hey! i voted for you and im doing a comment to, i rekon its really good, its how heaps of chiks feel out thur, and how i felt!!! but boys are stupid! sum are ok, lol keep writeing!! chek out mi poem, buhbi

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