wow thats really good, i used to have a biiarch of a step mum like that, i hope he dont effect u meantaly, dont hurt ya self, and im reali hapi u still love him! thats n awsum poem gurl, gud on ya!!!

you know what? i am so sorry for what happened to you, but that happened to me too........ my dad was a drunk..... but check out my poems especially "daddys mad today" thanks!
jescelle

oh no no no this poems was really nice..I liked it very much..sorry about your dad

Unloved ♥

this poem is really good, i think it had a nice flow to it and it's a way that ppl use to hide thier true feelings by drinking, it's sad though. i have a granda like this it's hard to deal with. keep your chin up. PLP

~lil slam~

your comments mean SO much to me, i can't even explain!

Poor Quality my ass..This is really good!!!!!!!

Loved it 5/5..
Chris

This is not poor quality girl. It is very well done. I'm sorry for the relationship you have with your father but it just shows how strong you are to still love him.
xox
-A

wow! i am blown away by this. the last stanza took my breath away... that was so beautifully written, flowed so good! that was really sad and im sorry you have to go through that :( i can really relate to this, keep your head up though, take care :) xxx

great poem! i love it!

Thats a really great poem...not poor quality at all...i know how you feel too my dad drinks all the time, hope things get better for ya!
xxxChristinaxxx

Certainly not poor quality at all! Very well written! I just hope it isn't true. If it is I am very sorry you have a dad like that! I hope you are ok! Read some of my stuff if you ever get a chance.

Well I have to disagree with you as I don't think your peom is of poor quality. It touched me as I feel for you. You're an excellent writer and very good at putting what you feel into words....
Mwa!!!

You really managed to capture the essence of your emotion...I appretiate that as it parallels my own.
It may be hard to do this at this time but accepting that your father is obviously hurting from something may help you: it does not lessen his crime but you can become more than him by forgiving him. If you love him, just try to let him know it, and know that you will be stronger for it. I hope your life becomes something you can be comfortable in. If you need to talk I am here.

it was again a good poem, not poor at all....but as i told you before, you have to do something to stop that father of yours! never love the ppl that don't love you back! stop letting him break you on the inside!
stay strong! *hugs*

that is a realll great poem. Keep up the good work.

Hey you commented on 2 of my poems I do the same! Extraordanairy (did I even spell that right?) as always! You definitely have a style and mood of using your words all your own. Again, another poem I can relate to. LuV Ya=],
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Don't let him hurt you, I forgot to add.