Why did you leave me?

by xxangelchicxx2000   Feb 25, 2005


i tried to find you
but you didn't see me
i traveled around the world
i walked on glass
i died a thousand times
just so i can find you
and kiss you one last time
i found you at last
in my back yard
you were asleep
like a baby
i tried to wake you
but you had left me.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    thanks always love suggestions~**~

  • 19 years ago

    by Marie

    totally awsome! The only thing i found that i think you should change is where you said good-bye you had god bye. Other than that it was great keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Essence of Blight

    Thanks for your comment! I love your poem! it's great! Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow really powerful another 5 keep writing take care xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by bluehun

    thanks for your comment,you to keep up the good work

Read All Comments (7)

More Poems By xxangelchicxx2000