that was cute and good..lol.. keep it up!! :)

Good Job keep it up!

haha thats kinda funny...poor guys lol. i like it though >5<
xxxChristinaxxx

wonderful poem.

Hey i like this poem - so full of great thoughts. :)

I like it! Flows very well! Your a good writer!
Love always,
Haily
xoxoxoxo

I'm not a real big fan of rap but I like to see if I can make beats to some poems and turn them into rap style readings. idk. lol. That's what I like about your stuff. It all has such a good beat to it so far. keep it up. kilman 5/5

That was very good, It had a nice rhythm to it

Haha very cute! made me laugh. good job

Very good poem, it has great rythm to it. very wonderful =) 5/5

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