You get a 5! You are a wonderful poet. Your messages comes out very clear in this poem. Very nice. The flow is good as well.

Good Work!

wow..that was amazing. The words that were chosen were perfect dude. (I seem to give that same feedback to alot of people) but this poem is perfect I wouldn't change a thing about it. Also, I can relate except I haven't had a friend who died from it, maybe one who tried but yeah. AWESOME JOB! KEEP WRITING FOR SURE! =P

i loved it, i love all your poems, they just captivate me, cuz your writings relate to me so much.

byes and laters,
brandy

Hey this is really good! even tho ur new, ur awesome, u have a good sense of emotion. Thnx 4 the comment on my poem, ill keep updated on all ur poems! *5*

So sad, but still very good, I love it. I wish that I could break the habit too, its a hell to go through every day!!! Love your poems, they speak to me *5*.....Keep in touch and thanks for your comment!!

Hey, this is really good...great story line and expresses alot of feelingz...i gave it a 5/5!! Keep on writing and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow! This is such a powerful poem! You done so well with this poem, I love the way you have worded it yet there is so much meaning behind it. And yes the word your trying to put across is very true....sadly I have to say once you start it is usually hard to stop.
Keep up the great work...I love it
Mwa!!!

This is an EXTREMELY amazing poem. So emotional, I have tears in my eyes now, but I suppose that's a good thing. Proves just how powerful that poem is. I love it to bits. Especially the last stanza, really finishes the poem beautifully.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

that is amazing your soooo good at writing, its all so well writen! and its awesome, good start, great middle,awesome ending! so in all its an amazing poem, your so good, keep your head up, ever need to chat i'm always here to listen.hugs n love-hayley(dc_dancer07@hotmail.com)

Wow,
I just wanted to say really good poem! I started to cry! I know how it is to lose a friend to their evil obsession. I am starting to lose myself to it once again. I lost 6 friends to it! Such a shame! Well, keep the amazing writing up! It means alot to me too! THANKS for sharing it with us!

-Carrie

Your so amazing. I hope that wasn't true. It's so hard to find someone that you can really open up to and someone that you can really give all yourself to, and I'm so sorry if you lost that someone. I have yet, to find mine, but I hope someday I will. Keep writing always. You may be new at it, but writing becomes an "obsession." But it's a good one, and you're good at it, so keep at it!
Always,
Danielle

Hey,
Awesome poem. I really loved how it flowed right out and sounded good doing it too. And thanks for the comment on my poem and I will take your advice and try the ryhmming scheme. But mainly when I try the ryhmming it doesn't come out the way I want it too so I do it the best way there is and still get the idea across. Anyways, I give you a 5 and keep up the good work.
Jenn.

WOW! that was intence...

~that was a good poem you must be a really good friend to that person and i kinda know what u's were or r going though..~

Wow.. thats good. You told me to come read some of your poems so i thought i'd do that today. You're quite good. Awesome job!

you're awesome. really.

Wow, the idea of the poem was totally great and it teaches a very good lesson too. I enjoyed this poem. I dont have anything bad to say about it, it gets 5/5 from me and nothing less :)
SatuzKa

I really liked this one.

Hey, great poem. You should probably know that I don't cut. But that doesn't mean my life is spectacular either. Although most everyone has friends and people who care about them, some people just don't have anyone and they are/feel forgotten. At least that's how I feel, forgotten. Well, I guess I'm sorry, I'm not here to cause conflict or anything, that's the last thing I wanna do. I dunno. sorry. I don't know what else to say...I'm almost crying...wow... Great poem anyways.
-Danielle.