Wow, i am speechless. This is amazing. I would love to see some of you other poems. i love it. When you have the chance could you come to see my poem and comment.

luv it. very good.:)

this is so incredibly sad and depressed. that numb feeling is worse than depression, trust me on that. great poem!! 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

amazing poem!!!

Not as good as Uncried Tears, but still incredible. All your poems are sad, but so wonderfully written. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up.

Great Job! I feel like my poems are a joke compared to the way you write. Ur words come together get. Keep them coming!!

WOW ! I Can feel the words flowing through me, You are a truely great writer keep it up !

Tigger, Thx for commenting on my poem

Wonderful poem, it was beautifully writen and wonderfully thought out that is for sure. i espeically liked these three lines

"These thoughts in her head
Outside she fakes it
Though Inside she's dead"

i liked the metaphore in that line, it is a wonderful one. it makes you think how many people are just pretending that they are happy and they are truely hurt inside, i think it makes you step back and think for a moment.

Five/Five

that was also a great poem!! well written!! keep up the great work!! :) take care..

AWESOME!!!
Keep it up!!

Please check some of my poems too!!!
i'll really appericiate it!!

luv,
Nzoiyna

Another great one. You are very talented hun!!

Love,
Tiff

Hey awesome poem! i really liked it! thanks for commenting on my poems! i really appreciate it!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

wow you are a great writer i love this poem i can really relate to it good job keep up the good work if you get a chance could you rear mine and comment please they are nowhere as good as yours but i would appreciate it
~*Sara*~

hey well u'll probly never read my comment cuz its like the 18th and i don't know how long ago u wrote this. Ne way this is a WONDERFUL poem! its sad yet written beautifully. usually i dont read dark poems cuz i dont like saddness but i c i've been missing some great talent! keep it up!!!

that was really good, i know how you feel!!

Talk about amazing poems! I'm speechless! I can really relate to this poem and all the feeling and emotions behind it...I defiently have to read the rest of your poems now...If you get the chance can you please look at my poems and comment
Mwa!!!

this is amazing!! i loved it..i can realte so well! keep up the great work!
take care
love tegan
xoxoxo

sweetie! this is wonderful, but i hope ur not cutting yourself1 pleez read my poem "dont turn to the knife"

This had a great flow to it. Sooo sad. I loved it though.

excuse me while i throw all of my poems out....that was amazing, mine are a heap of trash compared to that lol........it was sad, but an amazing poem, i like all of your work.....keep it up =).......and keep your head up.......laterzzz hun 5/5