Thank You*!* ((repost))

by trixy17   Feb 27, 2005


Thank You

You left me all alone
In a world of my own
You should have rescued me
But you were to blind to see

Flames were licking at my heart
You had torn me right apart
Tears blurred my eyes
But you just ignored my cries

I thought we were friends
But you wanted it to end
I found you were a user
When you called me a loser

I tried to carry on
I started to get strong
I picked up my own pieces
I ironed out the creases

I opened up the blinds
And then I did find
I never needed you
Soon others knew it too

I was shadowed in your might
But now I’ve found my light
I am my own person
Of that I am certain

I walk into school
You still don’t have a clue
A throng of kids follow me
And that is when you do see

I have recovered
Now I have friends like no other
You changed me a lot
All those days that we fought

Fighting you made me who I am today
So now I just want to say
These words are right on cue…
Thank you, thank you, and thank you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsten Ferguson

    really good; it reminds me of me and my old friend.

  • 19 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Wow, this is a beautiful poem. It really touched me. I have been through this, at first it's sad/hard/painfull, but good/happiness/strength and joy came at the end. I'm glad you felt that too. I loved the rythem to this peom, and i especially loved the line:
    ' I ironed out the creases'. It's really good. Great job! Please keep writing!
    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)