Broken Toy

by BrokenToy   Feb 27, 2005


A Broken Toy

I write this as
I cut my broken skin.
All the pain
just goes away.

All the sadness
disappear this moment.
Every single hurt
flees away.

My broken skin
is a sign of pain,
A pain to big
to just fade away.

I tell you this
because I need.
My heart is broken
and has gone away.

I have no wish,
I have no dream,
I have no happiness,
I am all alone.

Nobody seem to understand
the pain that I have.
They assume I'm happy
but it's all a act.
I just want to flee
flee far and away.

Because I am
truly a broken toy!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hun,

    Well done for your debu poem. its insightful in not only getting to know you, but to your writing style and where you're coming from. I see hope in your writing eyes, and I see a broken girl in need of a pen. this truly is wonderful, and I'm thankful to you for sharing. Short sweet and to the ponit with a few metaphors and well placed words along the way =) keep it up

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    5/5 I like how it flows in lines 9-12

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    The last line was great - not sure if the exclamation was neede dbut thats my pickiness
    Keep writing - this is a great poem =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaely

    This is a really good poem with a lot of depth and meaning, good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    i love it and i no how u feel good job and keep it up and hang in there!! look at my stuff if u have time....

    ~ShAtTeReD*HeArT~
    o yea 5/5

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