Cut

by Jamie   Feb 27, 2005


I sit in a dark place
I call home
i have a knife
I remember... now why I sit alone
I take a sharp moment
Just to breathe
What the hell I am actually seeing
Time winds and passes me by
I can't stand why so many don't understand...
i am so used to relieve the pain
I see how hurt I make everyone feel
I can't stop and take back the things I have done
That's why I do what I am going to
So now I flash back
and unwind the pain
I take the knife to my arm
and release slowly and deep
how great I feel the sharpness of the knife
I keep breathing and take it pace by pace
Just to know I can focus on something so I don't care bout anything else
I just bleed and lay down
How much I scar
to not notice my past
I cut myself and take a breathe
Now I am rewinding why I am here
Damn how I should have cut more deep... and just end it now

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This was a good poem, it seemed to lack structure to it. I don't know maybe it is just me and being a stickler for strcture but it seemed to lack it. I liked the poem and i didn't like the message it presented but i would rather hear this one then an explicit one...never was one for those..i actually rolled my eyes at that, i am just not really into explicit writings...just who i am.

    Well anyways this was a good poem and i think you should stick with it.

    P.S. thank you for both your comments on my poem and i appreciate it, sorry it took me so long to comment back to one of your poems but that poem got a great outburst of comments.

  • 19 years ago

    by Alexis

    aw.i hope u feel better. this is really gud i kno exactly how u feel. can u comment on sum of my stuff if u have the time

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