Wow I loved it exellent job!

Great!!! 5 stars for this one =)
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i really like this one it is outstanding my kind of poem 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

You write your poems about love alot of the time, the great thing about them is that they are easy to connect with. Good job.

great poem and so true. you are a talented poet keep up your work

Jacs
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5/5..sooo good. keep it up

take care,
much love,
Shannon

hey, I liked it. Good job. keep it up. 5/5

~no more

This is a very deep and throught provoking poem. I agree there are times when you're dealing with matters of the heart that wants can become somewhat confused with needs and vice versa. This is a very original write, it's short and to the point. You did a very good job here, keep up the good work.

great poem keep up the good work

yups short n sweet...very thoughtful too..good work

Excellent poem! 5 I can really relate to this poem! <3 5

good poems liked the conculsion, lines 6-9, I just think could be touched for the flow to be better, not that it's bad it's good