Beat Me

by AntiSocial16   Feb 28, 2005


I know it’s bad, I wasn’t intending it to be good. I just got really upset because my mom started beating the hell out of my sisters and I HATE IT when she does that. I told her to hit me, not them, but she didn’t listen. I’m sorry. Comment/vote if you’d like, but I know it’s bad so if that’s what you’re going to say, don’t even bother. Thanks for reading though.

You pulled her hair
She landed flat on the floor
You kicked her hard in the side
What did you do that for

You slapped her across the face
When she was only four
She landed upon the bed
What did you do that for

You walked over to me
As I cowered against the door
You gave me a rounded fist to the jaw
I know what you did this for

The same question always running
Faster through my head
Every time you hurt them
This is what is said

What did you do that for
Jen did nothing, Mag is just a child
Me you just hit
To make your life worth while

But them, they don’t deserve it
And they never ever do
So please hit me instead
Don’t make them black and blue

Jen’s a pretty girl
I love her with all my heart
She’s my younger sister
You hit her, it tears me apart

Mag is still growing
And she’s just the baby
But you don’t seem to care
I care, so will you just hit me

I’m asking you with all my life
Don’t hurt them, please
Just put all the bruises and cuts on me
And put my heart at ease

I just want to know
That they will be safe and sound
I don’t want to worry their gonna get hurt
Whenever you’re around

This is you’re final chance
Please make one right choice
Mother, hit only me, not them
Only hear my screaming voice

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  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow. Im so sorry that your mother does this to you. And yes you should protect your sisters with all your heart but who will be able to protect you? You shouldn't let her do this to you, even if she is your mother she should never beat you like that.

  • 17 years ago

    by PinkLaces

    This is really upsetting!
    But good poem, well done. x

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    It wasn't a bad poem :) But.. I'm really sorry to hear that happened *cries* I hate it when these things happen. I wish that things will get better for you, dear *hugs u* Stay strong, never give up hope!
    Thank you for the comment, it meant a lot.

    Take care *hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    Hey thats wrong of your parent to hit you guys but this poem is great so keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea

    That Hit Me Hard.
    I Feel Your Pain So Bad.
    My Boyfriend Use To Hit Me.
    And He Beats On Me When Did Something Wrong, But O My Gosh, That Hit Me Really Hard.
    I Cried For You I Wanted To Scream Out For You. I Feel So Bad For You.
    I Wish I Was As Good As A Write As You Are. Your Giving Me More Emotions Then I've Ever Felt, I Hope You See This, And I'll Try And Post A Poem Tomorrow. But, Gosh, You Have The Greatest Poems I Love Them Alot.