thanks to all that comment on this poem. ill try and comment on yours if i find the time!

this is soo sad! very good poem, i dont think its bad at all. i'm sorry you have to go through that. i hope all goes well for you...

Very emotional poem hun. Well done. Quite worrying though, I hope everything's okay.
As for your comment on my poem munchkin, 'Realise' is spelt with an 'S' in Britian, Where I live, and a 'Z' in America, presumably where you live :)
Thought You'd like to know chickadee.
Anyway, Take care of yourself
All my love,
Laura.

this isnt bad at all, the words flow well and its full of emotion, fantastic write. very sad though, i hope everything will be alright for you, stay strong always and take care, lu -x-x-x-

hey...

im sorry.... V_V

this poem is wonderful though.

-rissy

I am so sorry for what you have to see, and feel. Get someone to help you, I know I have been there, and there are people who will stop this pain for you, and your sisters. The Lord has blessed them with you, you are an angel to them, Never leave them.

wow.. i am so sorry..that was amazing

very good! 5 stars for this one *****
very good job!! please check out my poem "I wanted everything" please comment/rate.. thanks a lot

Good Poem,
Sorry About Its Meaning!!!

Failed

Hon I hate when that happens. I had a stepdad who did that to my family he hit my mom too. It has a lot of feeling 5/5

That Hit Me Hard.
I Feel Your Pain So Bad.
My Boyfriend Use To Hit Me.
And He Beats On Me When Did Something Wrong, But O My Gosh, That Hit Me Really Hard.
I Cried For You I Wanted To Scream Out For You. I Feel So Bad For You.
I Wish I Was As Good As A Write As You Are. Your Giving Me More Emotions Then I've Ever Felt, I Hope You See This, And I'll Try And Post A Poem Tomorrow. But, Gosh, You Have The Greatest Poems I Love Them Alot.

Hey thats wrong of your parent to hit you guys but this poem is great so keep it up.

It wasn't a bad poem :) But.. I'm really sorry to hear that happened *cries* I hate it when these things happen. I wish that things will get better for you, dear *hugs u* Stay strong, never give up hope!
Thank you for the comment, it meant a lot.

Take care *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

This is really upsetting!
But good poem, well done. x

Wow. Im so sorry that your mother does this to you. And yes you should protect your sisters with all your heart but who will be able to protect you? You shouldn't let her do this to you, even if she is your mother she should never beat you like that.