I think that was a good ending...hmm perhaps you could stick it in broken friendships if I understand the poem correctly? great work however-5

God Bless
Love Heather.

thanks heather..yeah you understand it correctly..i actually put it in there first but i wasnt sure if it was right..thanks!! :) take care. god bless..

Nice job..well written! 5/5 keep it up
-J-

i like it! if i remember i'll definately come back to see if you ended up adding more! either way it's a good poem:)
xxxChristinaxxx

Very cute poem! wondrful rythem... keep it up.