Finally Free

by Kailynn Makenna   Mar 3, 2005


I’m feeling so sad
I wish I knew why
And all I want to do
Is sit alone and cry

I'm getting really tired
Of pretending I'm just fine
And I'm feeling very tempted
To end this life of mine

My life is falling apart
And everything’s going wrong
And each day it becomes harder
To prove that I am strong

There's nothing I can do
To try and make this right
When it doesn’t even matter
I’ve clearly lost the fight

The smile on my face
Is slowly fading away
And my wanting to live
Gets smaller everyday

I'm starting to believe
That living is not for me
And I’d be better off
If I was finally free...

..yea i know its bad..
..i wrote it when i was really upset...
...vote and comment if you choose...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Hoover

    Hey, I Really Like this poem you wrote, *5*
    i can relate, i feel the exact same way, keep up the good work, read some of my stuff if you get the chance,

  • 19 years ago

    by sara

    wow i love this poem its great i feel that way right now to so i can really relate to it keep up the great writing and i hope you feel better
    **Sara**

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    that was sooooo good sometimes its easier to write when you upset i guess....your feelings really come out, well it least it seems that way...i can really relate to this alot check out mine if you want. hope things get better for you!
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    Thanks andrea i appreciate it..and thanks jessie i appreciate your comments as always :)

    xX-Katherine-Xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jess

    WONDERFUL POEM! EXCELLENT JOB! IF I COULDA GIVEN YOU A 100000 I WOULD HAVE!! but i had to settle with a 5... :o) GREAT JOB KATHERINE KEEP IT UP!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!

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