i love this yeah it's short but it sounded like it came to you so easily and really flowed keep it up!
xxxChristinaxxx

another great poem, ur really talented, great job!!

Short and to the point. Beautifully written.

i love it. its no question that you are oe of the people who r born with the talent of writting. good job.

good poem....

Great poem! A lot of emotion! Keep it u!

Love,
Tiff

Great poem.. 5/5 for you..
Keep up the good work..
Please check out my poems, it would mean a lot to me..
Hugs from September =)

Can some one please tell me why this is rated so low it derserves a 5 and thats what i am giving ya ... the main reason is it flowed perfectly ... i loved it very well done keep it up

Great poem.. 5 stars for this one =)
Please check out some of my poems..
hugs from September