Lover's Suicide

by My tormented little heart   Mar 5, 2005


Here is a story about once upon a time
Where two peoples love was a favorite pastime
The love faded quickly and was about to end
But something inside them made it transcend

They knew the separation would tear them apart
Leaving them alone with a cold, lonely heart
So they held on closely to each other
Never letting go, they made a perfect cluster

But as time went by it took its toll
Giving her pain she couldn't handle
Destroying every thought she believed
For nights and nights she cried and grieved

He just couldn't take it anymore
Gave up on being her savior
Tired of suppressing his feelings
Needed to let go and spread his wings

She went to pieces and lost her sanity
The world around her felt so hazy
Then she had no reason to live
She finally found her suicidal motive

She popped the pills and tied the rope
There was nothing left, there was no hope
Her eyes were closed, the noose was tight
She jumped off the chair and died that night

Her long lost love slips in the door
To come and tell her he cant live without her anymore
But what he sees to his surprise
Is a hanging corpse surrounded with flies

He grabs the razor that he's always hidden
Digs it deep into his skin
Swallowed the rest of the pills and died
Creating the story of a lover's suicide

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  • 18 years ago

    by CheyChey

    Nice story it made me cry so dat was good! :)

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    by Cristi

    great poem i understand it

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    by BrokenAliena

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    by *NiCoLe*

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    by Megin

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