by Lipton          Mar 5, 2005
    
        category :
            Love, romance /
            i love you
            
    
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            A tear rolls down my sodden cheek,  | 
by Tammy
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            Beautifully written Lipton.Very honest and full of emotion. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.  | 
by Amanda Bee
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            Wow! Excellent poem, Lipton! I really enjoyed it. My favorite part was where  you wrote:"Until the End of Time I’ll love you,  | 
by Jesse
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            A lot of emotion in this poem.  I am guessing it was first writen as a song with the chorus repeated.  But anyways I like it.  Take care.  | 
by Mandy-Rae
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 i liked this one, keep up th egood work. Check out some of my stuff when you get time.  | 
by Brookeღ
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 That was an amazing poem! It was sad but very well done! If u would check out some of mine sometime! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke  |