Death....

by ☼totalDARKNESS☼   Mar 5, 2005


As the last drop of blood
hits the floor
i try n struggle
to take one last breath
I hope to see
everyone in my life
who made me feel
this way about myself
my parents come right through
the door and my
life flashes b4 me
they pick me up
and carry me to the car
N drive me to the hospital
there wasnt a thing more
that they could do
even the doctors said
that it was to late
_____________(_death_hits_)

**this was written by one of my best friends, and i thought it was really good and she doesnt have an account so i thought i should put it on here. please write comments and rate this so i can tell her that it is alomst as awesome and as beautiful as she is!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by CINDY

    real nice poem but so sorry that happend men
    cindy
    behind the shadows
    shadow

  • 19 years ago

    by ☼totalDARKNESS☼

    i love it!!! i know this seems like i am rating my own poem, but im not, this is my friends and i think it is totally amazing how someone...as...different as her can write something so beautiful, i love you lisha!!!!!!!!!!!