Hurt

by ☼totalDARKNESS☼   Sep 13, 2006


I hurt myself today
to see if i can still feel pain
the pain you put me through
when you said "I hate you"
I sliced my boney wrist
for everytime we kissed
the kisses or your lust
take my life i must
A chunk of skin must leave
to see if it still bleed
i believed in you
this suicide is true
the blood dripping is black
now theres no turning back
i tried to safe my life
but i couldnt drop the knife
the blood comes to a stop
then the lifeless knife drops
the pulse stops in my veins
i killed myself today

(some of the words are from the song hurt by johnny cash, but are arranged into my own words)

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  • 17 years ago

    by KB

    Its a really good twist to johnny cashs origional

  • 17 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Awesome poem. 5/5
    -steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    That was a good poem, well done! 5/5 Keep it up!