Falling Faster

by FallenxStar   Mar 5, 2005


With every breath I'm falling faster
this life of mine is such a disaster
holding on to the lies I know
this time I'm really letting go
without a doubt I'm fading away
tomorrow will not bring a better day
ruuning away, everythings a blur
this pain I feel has no cure
darkness has come, and now I'm crying
I really don't care at all about dying
my heart sings out a sickening tune
the end of my despair is coming soon
all alone, I pull out my knife
I think about my wasted life
in a matter of seconds I'm surrounded by blood
my pain is leaving me in a flood
no more worries, no more lies
shadows whisper silently as I die

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  • 17 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    This is amazing ... i can relate completely ... but this is really strong and flows beautifully! ... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by FallenxStar

    wow no ones ever said that about my stuff...thank you

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    This is a fantastic weave of imagery, and the wording is exquisite.
    Your vivid detail is strikingly romantic, and its compelling darkness is strangely attractive.

    I've seen this medium of suicide frequently used on this forum, however you've distracted me from repetition with your unique poetic skills. Thank you for sharing Star.

    Elizabeth~

  • 19 years ago

    by FallenxStar

    hehe im glad you liked them

  • 19 years ago

    by FallenxStar

    aww you really think so?

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