this si a great poem with a great flow do u cut then?? well i'm here if you need to talk chack my poems out if u can love jessxxxx

wow loved the way you wrote this, it's powerful in a speciel way...love it!!! You are not alone!

that was a realli good poem! and where in da world did you get that picture!!! oh yeah you can stop by and look at some of my poems if you want.....................

i can SO relate to this poem... u did a good job... keep ur head up, you've got talent

great writing! im sorry you feel this way tho!!! xxxxxxx take care xxx

your not alone in feeling like that hunny! i used to cut but i havnt for 2weeks as i promised one of my best mates that i wouldnt soo ahh yeah. where did u get ur picture from? itz really deep. when i seen it i got really freaked out because thats exactly how my arm looked at one stage....i'd had enough so i just kept cutting and cutting, deeper and deeper. that pic scares me! can u please tell me where u got it from?ta.

really good...i cut to..i kno i have commented on all your poems but its so wierd we are alike badly...love your poems bye xx

really good... loved it... I cut myeself but my friend said that she really cared about me and I didn't want her to think I was a loser but I so wanna cut soo bad... :o(...

loved it...x33

xoxo,
**Heather**

holy crap!!! that was great like seriously awesome

hey holly i kno what its like to cut i really hope you can overcome it and enjoy the life that God gave you even if its not what u wish it would be great poem tho

i no what its like 2 cut and it sucks. u have an awesome way of expressing ur self in this poem b/c i felt suicidal the same way 4 a long time. u pretty much took the words out of my mouth of how i felt and how it feels 2 cut.

I love it. Written very well.

<3 Rachel Morgan

Hey this is a really great poem I loved it!! I used to cut but I haven't for 3 weeks because I promised my boyfriend so ya know.. But your not alone cuz I know how you feel even though I made that promise now sometimes even I think about cutting so anyways a really GREAT poem.. It meant so much to me!!! Keep it up!!! :-)
Stephanie

I love it lovelovelovelove

Hey this was really good, you said you wanted contructive critisism but its hard to criticise your work because there isnt anything wrong with it.
maybe i am too nice or maybe i am write and you are really good.
its not the best work i have ever seen but i dont read heaps of work because alot bores me, but this doesnt.
oh and if you wanna talk to me about being sad or whatever you can email me at volcom_stoner1@hotmail.com or add me on msn, its the same adress for that.
catch, \/oL{o/\/\

This was good.

Depressed atm so not really into typing much but good poem. Nice flow and all..
Good job