I'm so sick of cryin'

by Holly   Mar 9, 2005


Some people told me I shouldn't try
Because all you do is make me cry
But I love you to much to let you go
I love you more then you think you know
You tell me that you just don't care
All those times I needed you there
to hold me when i hurt real bad
to dry my tears, and take my sad
you can't understand how i feel inside
when it was over, I just died
All I want is for you to see
is what you really mean to me
Ever since that horrible day
that i heard those words you had to say
I can't stop thinking about you
I want you to know all this is true
Everything you've read
is about the things you've said
I'll never, ever stop tryin'
But I am so sick of Cryin'

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  • 19 years ago

    by Insane Inside And Out

    Sad poem and simple but good. Keep up the writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    yeah, i've felt the same way. Very good write, I enjoyed reading it. I don't really have any critique for this poem, over all i thought it was a pretty good poem. I'll give it 4, good job, keep on writing.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    i have already commented on this poem but since you wanted me to comment on it again. so here i am~!!~
    i loved it. keep it up. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Chad Reamer

    excellent poem 5/5 keep up the good work and cant wait to hear wat u say about mine

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, very powerful poem, I really like your work, This one was so well written, well done keep it up xxx

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