by ShadowHeart Mar 10, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
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Discrimination |
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i liked this one... =) very interesting.... keep writing =) |
by pinkalias
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I really liked the main idea that you had and the symbols you used relating the the "taste the rainbow" slogan. However, you poem didn't really flow. I think you need to work on the format because the rhythm seems to be nonexisting or just all over the place. |