awsome poem! thanx for all the comments

you think love is evreything good and happy, then i hate to tell you that love hurts more then a bullet to the leg, get a life and learn some things that will help you be a little more intelegent about love and hate.i give it a 1

Lance is harsh, sheesh, love differs....I think its a bright poem from imagination, thank you for the comment,
God bless
with love,
Heather

Honestly, I don't think Lance is trying to be rude by saying that, no offense to anyone, but I think from another perspective, he is just giving a sort of advice in a different way. Lance, as I've known him, doesn't really say rude things because he wants to, he just says them because that is how he feels, and that's his opinion. But an opinion is just that, something you can ignore. In all fairness to Lance, I didn't think that was rude at all.

Great Poem by the way. I could relate somewhat. :-D, take care

~Sierra

great poem! i love it! really creative! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

really good i like it u should let ur imagnation run wild more oftenlol

amazing! your imagination did great, run it wild all the time! hehe.

i apolgize if i offended you in my last comment, but right now im dealing with alot that ruins love for me, so anything that makes love look good, i'm not a big fan of.

really good thx for the comment and rateing

good imagination

This is my second time reading this, and its good, i now wish that i haddnt already voted on it, other wise youd get a 4, nothing against the poem, but its not your best, and i vote on comparing a poets work to his/her other work.