Big 5 for you! -- I love this whole poems concept, great rhymes...keep it up

with love,
Heather

*5/5* Its short and its good, the rhyming seems natural, and you showed your emotions well, keep it up xxx

hey baby how u been yea i checked out at one to go to my moms great poem sweetheart keep up that great work

hey baby how u been yea i checked out at one to go to my moms great poem sweetheart keep up that great work

hey baby how u been yea i checked out at one to go to my moms great poem sweetheart keep up that great work

hey baby how u been yea i checked out at one to go to my moms great poem sweetheart keep up that great work

hey baby how u been yea i checked out at one to go to my moms great poem sweetheart keep up that great work

Wow! thats incredible - thanks fro your comments. this poem is amazing!

Jemma

excelent poem. sorry i dont have a chance to read more right now. i will try to get more later. good work though, keep up the poems. i know the feelings.

As someone who formerly cut I hope and pray that you can take this sadness you have and substitute it for the talent that you show in your writing. Trust me to write is a far more positive way to get these feelings out honey. Love Rach

ur a great writer ya know that..that was really well put..nice poem

Unloved ♥