excellent poem! your writing is great!

another great one:)....5/5

I enjoyed this entire poem, but I have to say that last stanza is amazing! It completely blew me away...keep it up~Holly

awww sad yet beautiful! i espec like the last two lines!!!!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

wow... sounds like you've got real mixed emotions for this girl! anyways, the poem was great. 5/5

This poem is soooo beautiful and I truely love it...WOW, amazing and perfect!!! I will surely read more of your poems...

please read my poem "angel of mine" and comment....our poems are unmistakably alike. Perhaps you will enjoy it as I did yours.

wow that was really good!!! 5/5
I feel you on this one
Much Love,Manda

Amazing! I love it! Please don't think I'm just typing to take up space I truly am enjoying every piece I read!

I love how you wrote about the line between love and hate as so many people will be able to relate to this.

Another excellent write! 5/5 I'll be adding you to my favorites...hope you don't mind.

wow amazing is all i can say 5/5 your in my favs

Guess what...I love this one too! <3

Beautiful work, of course...sounds like it's coming from a mixed up mind...a confused heart...touching poem. I love the whole idea...Angel with no wings... makes me think of the whole love/hate relationship...and how love can be wonderful but terribly painful at the same time...

xxx