Talking In My Mind

by Cassie   Mar 11, 2005


Sitting in the darkest corner, she is all alone
I reach out to embrace her, but my presence seems unknown
She's crying & I wonder why she would shed these tears
Her life just seems so perfect, like she would have no fears
I sit here & I can't help thinking, when will someone come
She looks so sad & empty, just what has she become?
She seems so lost & hopeless, won't someone help her out?
Do you even listen to her cry? Or hear her scream and shout?
She's asking for some help while she is choking on her dreams
& wondering so aimlessly while nothing's what it seems
I can't help feeling helpless, there is nothing I can do
Just sit by & watch her & I'll pray she makes it through
I try to reach & touch her & I'm shocked at what I find
It seems I'm all alone in here, just talking in my mind
Viewing on another while my hand is on the mirror
While all I see is what I am, this is what I fear
How did I become this girl? When did my life change?
I'm screaming now PLEASE HELP ME but my voice seems out of range
I don't know how this came to be & when I will return
But somehow now I feel okay, & you show no concern
I'll lead this lie I call my life & no one will know
Unless of course I write this down, & then I choose to show...

***please vote and comment... I'd really appreciate it a lot***

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    just click on my name and read any you like which you havent read. That would be easier but i think you wud like angel friend

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Take a look at (bad day today) cos i think u will like it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Priscilla

    great poem! i luv it! 5/5 .plz check/comment on some of my poems sometime thanx!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey i like that! 5/5 Maybe you could tell me what you think of my poem further down the page. Thanks :)

  • 19 years ago

    by KN

    Hey Cassie,
    This poem is great! I really like it, but then again, I usually like all of your poems. I like how you're not afraid to show emotion in your writing. I could really understand this one. Keep up the good work. And don't forget to tell me when you've picked a poem to enter in that contest. I think you've got a very good chance at making it. I'll ttyl.