I have to say goodbye (song)

by Noelle k.   Mar 13, 2005


You think you know me, but you
have no clue about what i do.

the fake smile forced upon me.

you think i don't care about anything, but the truth is I'm falling apart.

I'm fighting these thoughts of mine. wondering whats left in life.

why was i given a life to just live a lie?

someone else deserves a chance. I'm starting to hate mankind.

what have i ever done in life, besides fail at everything I've tried?

whats the sense of living life if you hate everything inside?

I cant take it anymore so goodbye....

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  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    those were amazing lines, i think if u structured it and added some more lines it would be an incredible song that ppl would love and be able to relate to (cuz i can relate to that). good work!!
    stay strong always

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    hmm, you seem definately to be taleneted at writing songs. I know that for sure, some of these songs sound like they could be sung by some of my favorite bands. I know that there is a lot of things good about this..but it doesn't quite go along the verse of a poem.

    I think you did a good job and it was very well thought out.

    P.S. thanks for your comment on my poem. i appreicate it.

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