Beautiful...just too beautiful...you write really well...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

THank you all.....Friends, I changed the first one, sorry I'm from the South, I really would never know proper English if it hit me in the face lol but I didn't change the second one, i liked it as is but thank you for the suggestions:)

Heather...it was great!! HunBun made me come read it because she said it was being ripped apart for no reason. I loved it! ;)

amazing !!!! loved the last line, i can totally relate

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~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Hey Heather. This was a really wonderful poem you wrote here. Sad but sometimes very true when it comes to love. I'm still trying to understand it. Love is something that'll never be learned fully. Love yah, bye...

i love it!!

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(in a very good mood)

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Heather, Beautiful, and awesome job. I'm Southern also and this is the way we speak. Go Southern Girl, Your talent is overwhelming. Loved it. hugs, lol, *Ann*

i dont really know what to say. so i'm just gonna tell you what i tell you a lot, another great one!

Beautifully penned with such sadness! Very well written~Holly

:) 5/5 you write so well I just love reading your poems because I know they will be awesome! :)