This was done well I liked the flow and loved the emotion it showed good job. I can see you have read poe, Its a good comploment but I would not over use the word. I seen it in a couple of your pieces, Nice comploment to the Poe but I think you could find your own voice. Oh well good going...

omg no poem has ever made me cry like this. 5/5 and this is so sad.
xoxo
paulette

wow..breathe taken..soo good..you captured that just right..wow..5/5

much love
shannon

My reference to Poe is to Eger Allen Poe. Evermore was a quote in a poem called the Raven. He had made it famous long ago. You used this reference a couple times in your work once is nice just don't use it as a staple in your work that was all I was trying to say. Just find your own voice that it. Well I hope this clears up any misunderstanding have a good day...

i dont like love poems but if i did i would like this poem. It is very well written!

very nice, a lot of emotion. Keep it up!

wow, that was very very powerful, the emotions were so heartfelt. Wonderful job.

that was one of teh most beautifully written poem i have ever read. i loved the lines:
Alone I listen to the waves
sighing upon this shore.
it flowed so well and was really touching. 5/5 xxxxx

wow...very powerful poem...i felt strong emotions the entire way through....aw i feel sad now!! definatly a 5/5

I have commented on this one before...still great though=0)

*Hugs Sabrina stelmach*

I'm speechless. this just blew me away, utterly fantastic. 5/5!!!!!

truly another great poem. Your worki s brilliant

Beautiful and so full of emotion and deep feelings . Words of love and beauty from the heart of a true gentleman !