Welcome to the Pit of Sorrow

by blackheartinlove   Mar 15, 2005


Welcome,
To the pit of sorrows,
Don\'t want to get better,
You\'re soul is eternally left.

Some left so long here,
Nothing ever will go back,
Those few who make it out,
Are reminded by the scars.

I look around my new found home,
Only to see sadness and anger,
Tears flood the room,
Screams ring in the air.

Young and old,
Live in here,
They gave away there heart,
And ended up here.

No one is allowed to leave,
They are stuck forever,
To plot against the evil who put them there,
The ones who don\'t care.

Everyone is forced to stay,
There is but one way out,
The one they love to surrender their heart,
And save your soul.

Alone I sit in the dark,
Wondering if you ever cared,
Hoping to see the light again,
Begging to love you no more.

** Really bad, but I was really extremely upset.. and I just couldn't get the right words out, sorry. **

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice, expressiv poem. keep writing :)
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in God ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by blackheartinlove

    I was dumped on the 13th.. It's hard to describe how important this indivdual was to me, but I have only myself to blame for the pain caused. As this was the second try at all that felt right to me, I let him back.. I have only myself to blame for letting him hurt me again.