Comments : My last poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    No! Stay! You are one one of the people who have given me confidence to keep writing! I've got a few more poems if you would like to read them. Thanks :)

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Stay please, Otherwise where will I go to have poems to relate to, you have a lot of talent, well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily

    im not gunna sit here and try to stop you,cause i dont know the pain your going through,but just know your not alone,im in pain also,and at times i feel like im ready to go,but,you have such talent in your writing,and thats awesome that you still have faith in God,just have faith that he does have a plan for you if you choose to stay here,i dont know you,but if you need someone to talk to,im here.
    xXxEmilyxXx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ stay strong, please sabrina, don't talk like this. a brother hug for you >:D<
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    awsome poem.. very good... this one is also so sad. wow! 5/5.. take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    wait wait your notleaving right?
    you have alot of talent just like this poem it was great so powerful except for the doubt of you leaving dont leave people must really care for you?

  • 18 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    wow great poem... it brings tears to my eyes! please stay strong! and thank you for commenting on my poem!
    If you haven't read my poem "To Everybody on this Site" please do, i want everyone here to read it! it goes out to everyone and it is told through my own, true experiences. please read and comment
    Much love ~ Tina

  • 18 years ago

    by *Guerita*

    on the top it should be know instead of knew i believe but besides that it is really nice comming from the heart
    -Lady Jaz

  • I gave you a five because I love your poems so much, there filled with so much emotion. What is being felt in the poem really touches me. Please continue writing the amazing poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Oh baby, to think you could ever feel this way. You poems themselves are enough to prove your talented beauty. Sometime if you feel like it I would invite you to read my poem "Suicide through someone else's eyes." Just a thought. I have tried to kill myself seven times in the last two years, and I am a cutter too, so I see where you are coming from. I wish I could hold you and make you feel loved and cared about and safe. It hurts me so badly to hear about suicide and how so many people want to die. I love you hun! Write me whenever you need a friend!

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    See? You manage to stay to this day...so don't give up...there is light...if u get rid of the dark...something I think u hasn't been able 2 do...hope you can...remember my advice...please don't let me down...

  • 18 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I cAN feel ur hurt 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Hey there,
    wow.. very dark, i like how you started it off by giving us a scene..i just hope that scene given wasnt real.. I just hope. well, hope ur ok. good job on this, and I have just written a new poem and would like ur opinion on it.. Its called, "Cause Of Death: Rape (Part I). Im working on Part II:). well i hope to read a new poem from you soon.
    Monique