Take in your hands

by Anna   Mar 19, 2005


Mournful cries and agony
What the shallow mind can not see

Shattered windows side by side
Carried off by the tide

For all the joy life may bring
Comes along a bee that will sting

And for what each future will hold
Is a story waiting to be told

It is nothing but a suicidal wish
To sit around waiting for bliss

Take in your hands the life you are
given
To achieve a dream one must be driven

To live perfect is a childish dream
To live happy is easier than it may seem

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  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    Nice poem....I like the message it portrays. You've done a good job w/ sentence fluency though some of the poem doesn't flow exactly the same. I'm usually not a rhyming-poem fan, but, you've done a good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    This is really good and it got me to think about my life, what a great idea and message to send out!!! Great flow and yeah just amazing!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    great message and this poem worked so well, it flowed amazingly well and was just awesome!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Very deep stuff, and i'm glad the topic of this poem is original. very good, i really enjoyed it. you ended the poem with very good words, it suits it so well. Keep writing, take care.
    Satuxxa

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