You Left Me...Why?

by XxXangeltearsXxX   Mar 19, 2005


On a winters day you died for me
To let me know you love me so
And everyday i cry for you
Wishing you didn't have to go

I lie alone at night looking up at the sky
As the world slowly passes by
I need you more now than i did before
But never again will you open my door

I cannot wait for death to take me
I must take myself to her
I loved my life when you were with me
But my time has come to farewell the earth

©XxXangeltearsXxX

Please comment on this poem, i know it isn't very good...but then again...I'm not very good so i have an excuse!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShelovesmeNOT

    Love it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    you have awesome poetry dont ever doubt yourself you are alot better than you think keep writing and maybe if yaz write enough you could write a book that would be cool! lol love your poetry keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    thank you everyone! i really appreciate this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    you dont know what your talkign about...not very good yeah right! you have an amazing talent, don't let it go...ever.

  • 18 years ago

    by iDeePanda

    better not go back on ur word, cuz i need the feedback as welll...lol
    ne way,i actually kinda liked it. don't feel bad, i ain't all that good neither.ne way, good job!!!

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