An Empty Life

by XxXangeltearsXxX   Mar 20, 2005


I walk on a road of shattered dreams
My heart slowly breaks at the sound of the screams
I call out for help but nobody hears
There is no one here to fight off my fears

A path of suffering lies on ahead
With no sighn of life, its deserted and dead
Thorns and prickles pierce my skin
I'm alone in a world of hatred and sin

Crystalline tears start to roll down my face
But still i keep up a steady pace
Along the road that has no end
In desperation i cry for a friend

Ive made the decisions that i think are right
So why is it me who has battles to fight?
A voice inside tells me not to loose heart
So i break the barriers that stop me apart

I try to go on but my strength has departed
The time has come to end what i started
With one last breathe i fall to the floor
Knowing tears will fall from my eyes no more

©XxXangeltearsXxX

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  • 18 years ago

    by little birdy

    Great similes and rhyming, looks like a poem from past experiance... and I'm sorry if it is... if anything... I know I'm another no-one... but if anything... I can try to help out with some words of advise!!! great poem though... 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sheri

    Amazing! It really is! I am a big fan!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shannon Loter

    This is really good. You have a rare talent :)

  • 18 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    I try to go on but my strength has departed
    The time has come to end what i started
    With one last breathe i fall to the floor
    Knowing tears will fall from my eyes no more

    That was my favorite part of the poem. Very powerful and meaningful. I love it a lot. I see a lot of talent. Keep it up.

    Savannah.

  • 18 years ago

    by broken angel

    Amazing...there is no other words...I'm speechless and in utter...amazement! 6/5! ~kt

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