Everyone has battles to fight

and ya point is by that andrew? ( i dont mean that in a smart way)

hey angel that was another wicked poem!! totali good!!!! xoxo bambam 5/5 agen!

oustanding flow i like your style

Unique style, very emotional and sad!!! I like this one alot....I relate somehow!!! You have a great way to express yourself, keep writing!!!

*Hugs sabrina*

amazing poem ...i really liked it

WOW that is well written..its a very beautiful poem!
xoxo-megan

Crystalline tears start to roll down my face
But still i keep up a steady pace
Along the road that has no end
In desperation i cry for a friend
i love this part, it really spoke to me and i could relate to it. keep up the good work

Wow... So real and fitting for my life. Excellent on my vote.

Great poem =] i can really relate to it

Amazing...there is no other words...I'm speechless and in utter...amazement! 6/5! ~kt

I try to go on but my strength has departed
The time has come to end what i started
With one last breathe i fall to the floor
Knowing tears will fall from my eyes no more

That was my favorite part of the poem. Very powerful and meaningful. I love it a lot. I see a lot of talent. Keep it up.

Savannah.

This is really good. You have a rare talent :)

Amazing! It really is! I am a big fan!

Great similes and rhyming, looks like a poem from past experiance... and I'm sorry if it is... if anything... I know I'm another no-one... but if anything... I can try to help out with some words of advise!!! great poem though... 5/5!