Silent Killer

by XxXangeltearsXxX   Mar 20, 2005


She lay there, shining in the moonlight
I reached out, knowing i could not fight
The temptation, my feelings were just too strong
My killer, had been lying still for so long

I sat down, knowing that i was ready
I held her, my killer i held steady
We connected, the pain was beyond what I'd feared
A river, a crimson flow appeared

I knew then, that what was done was done
I ran the race, but somebody else had won
I'd never say it was me who took my life
It wasn't, my killer was a knife

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  • 17 years ago

    by tigerdan

    I liked it. it was suspenceful 'till the end. Very imagenative and strong. It had substance in it. It realy made me think about what you were trying to conveyand and then...;)

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow..interesting poem. i really liked the ending

  • 20 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    "I knew then, that what was done was done
    I ran the race, but somebody else had won
    I'd never say it was me who took my life
    It wasn't, my killer was a knife"
    Amazing lines right there, great poem once again theres nothing else to say expect brovo!lol

  • 20 years ago

    by Amba

    wow that was really awsum, i reali liked that aye, ur a reali talanted writer, keep it up xoxo bambam

    {plz chek out sum o mine} i gave u
    5/5

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