Hit the floor

by newlun   Mar 20, 2005


What is this feeling?
this emptiness inside
this felling that i have no one
thats makes me want to hide

it didn't use to be like this
i didn't use to care
it all just fell into place
the perfect feeling that was so rare

now its all so strange inside
like everythings been taken out
just one huge empty soul
and I'm filled with all this doubt

now i have all these questions
so many things i don't understand
i don't feel like i have a purpose
like a thumb cut off a hand

why am i here
who made this all
what is it for
what do i do
where do i go
who do i trust
why cant i know

this doesn't make sense
what does it mean
its all a blur
like nothing Ive seen

take it away
leave none behind
i don't care anymore
just give peace to my mind

i don't have a choice
but to do something more
Ive fallen so far
and i just hit the floor

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Oh so sad but brilliant. It is a poem alot can relate to! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    Very well written. Good job. Stay strong.
    ~keep it up~
    5/5

    -no more