This poem is really amazing and so well written...I love it!!!! Keep writing!!!

amazing poem!!

Thanku all x

amazing, you always manage to fill your poems with emotions and always paint a clear picture. liked the lines

Falling with her eyes set low
Losing grip upon this land
Bleeding fingers from waiting too long
For someone to understand

in particular, seemed to stand out to me. hope you are ok and the rainbows appear soon, stay strong :) luv u -x-x--x-

Amazing poem hun, i also have a comment about those lines, they seemed to catch my eye too, *hugs* i am trying to understand hun, :) and the longer i know you, the more i believe i do understand :) and because i love you with all my heart, i believce i can understand a bit more :) i lvoe you Toni and keep writing :):) *hugs* xxxxxxxxxxxxx

wow. good poem

Little droplets of emotion
Brimming on sad eyes
Rolling down a pale face
Diluting desperate cries

..I love those lines. Perfect.
That's all I have to say on the matter :)
..Except, I hope everything's okay. I'm worried :T
Take care of yourself puddin.
ALways in my heart and prayers.
All my love,
Laura.

That is awesome, loved it loved it loved it, seemed to flow so perfectly and effortlessly, amazing, stunning, always here,
ellie
xoxooxxx

wow!!! I mean hooolly!! lol. Sheer darkness can I couldn't help but fall in love with it!! Toni-that was amazing just like everything you write!!