Comments : 7 Days

  • 19 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    thanks i like yours too!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow such a heartfelt poem very well written ur way with ur words was so amazing! Exellent Job! Would u check out My Blessing and Meaning for me please Thanx and Take Care!

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    interesting poem nice flow

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    omg!! this poem is off the hook!! i love it!! it was soo strong!! and i knew form the first stanza:

    "At first you said I’m sorry
    You knew that you were wrong
    But then you stayed another week
    That’s 7 days too long"

    that this would be a hit!! lovely work!! keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    That was such a strong poem! Wow, you have a lot of talent for sure! I think you did an ESPECIALLY good job on rhyming, and also the flow of the poem was beautiful!!! What can i give you??? 5/5 and no less, keep on writing, take care!
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    That was such a brilliant poem!
    My favourite verse was definately:

    "At first you said I’m sorry
    You knew that you were wrong
    But then you stayed another week
    That’s 7 days too long"
    I give you a five for it!
    Take care,
    Rahjelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Whoops thats worrying, I cant spell my own name *blushes* I meant to put Rachelxx lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow so great Abbi! I love this one... I voted a 5! keep it up..

  • 19 years ago

    by Cassie

    wow! that was amazing! i totally love it! I really appreciated the comment you left me on "If I was Dancing" it really means a lot to me. Fell free to check out more of my poems if you want to...

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    thats so sad...i'm sorry if thats true. 5/5 though keep it up!
    ~Christina

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    Oh god, this really got to me. you have no idea how much this means to me or how much about me it explaines. great writing. reallly great writing. all i can say. -Leah