excellent write, i like it!!

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was brilliant!! Pure genius!! So sad and filled with emotion-I can completely relate!! This was *screams* AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow...lol, sorry, could you tell I loved it? Well i did, and I do!! It was/is AMAZING!!!!!!!! You poetic genius, you!

lol, love you lots!!

~Sierra

Aww Allie...im here for yu baby girl...

Fair enough. Lonelyness can me the greatest muse for a remarkable poem. Sure, maybe the structure could be improved, but you can not deny the emotional conent in this piece of art.
Though, here is one suggestion:
"Dragging me to Hell"
I believe it would sound better with another syllable; maybe 'down' (dragging me down) would work well?
:-) good work.

you know i'll always see your tears whether i'm there or not...you'll never be invisible to me...