A popular trial

by Donna   Mar 22, 2005


He was in the distance
she could see him a far
what was he doing
getting in that car

I told him not to talk to strangers
no matter who they were
this makes no sense
espeacilly not to her
She alled the police to give them a report
They told her not to worry
they'll find him after court

The courtroom was full taht day
a popular trial going on
Everyone was there
but now her child was gone

Nobody cared
what was going on
all because there was a popular trial going on

Her son was never found
and now shes starting to gray
all because a popular trial
that was happening that day

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  • 20 years ago

    by Jamie

    Yeah f the system right...it can be crappy sometimes but great job writing about it thats a s.h.i.t.y situation, greast flow great rhyming kinda good job 5/.5

  • 20 years ago

    by Donna

    THANKS BUT COMPARED TO SOME OF YOURS ....YOU CAN FINISH THE REST WITH YOUR IMAGINATION!!!!!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Donna

    Thanks, isnt it funny how society puts theunimportant things first. like in the poem they all wanted to wacth what was going on in the trial instead of helpin the woman get her child back crazy isnt it!

  • 20 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I think people are often mislead when they think they are going to get a fair trial. Your poem was titled fixingly and the poem and content itself was pretty good. :)

    ^^Kalah.

  • 20 years ago

    by David Paul

    I like'd it cause it reminded me of one of my uncles and what happened to his god child. It was a hard time for us all. Good job on the poem.

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