Just One Hand

by JustAFoolInLove   Mar 24, 2005


I held your hand
And broke your dreams
I don’t understand
It’s unreal, it seems
That one thing so small
Could do so much
And ruin it all
With a simple touch
I ruined a girl
Who once was mine
This precious pearl
Has lost its shine
What did I do?
It’s just not fair
That this debut
Holds so much despair
Is she okay?
It’s all my fault
I pray and pray
The knife will halt

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Carlee?? Or no? Sounds like it to me..

  • 19 years ago

    by eternal rest

    hmm... i think im gunna take parts of that previous post back... "looks like be both feel pretty bad huh" i feel worse. "i... i dont know that else to say except that im sorry........" for what? what is there for ME to be sorry for... nothing... you broke my heart... im not the one thats supposed to be sorry.

    Im not usually like this, i just wanted to say the things that have been on my mind and taking my sleep from me, and everything else about falling in love with this kid that doesnt make any sense...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    amazing zac! i luved it

  • 19 years ago

    by eternal rest

    im sorry... for everything i said... i shouldnt have started it...... looks like we both feel pretty bad huh?

    i..... i dont know what else to say except that im sorry.......................................

    :'( Kelly

  • 19 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    by the way, kelly...if you read this... i'm so sorry for everything i've done... you have no idea...