Oh i dunno what to say...... I feel your pain through your writing and i hope to god you don't really want to end it. You are great, just remember that. stay strong hun! U r a star! Amanda

wow....excellent poem, i like it!!

Wow...this is a great poem. You did a great job! xoxoxo

Beautiful poem, the flow is great too, will you check out some of mine and comment?

What a great poem! So sad ..

Take care hun <3
^^Kal.

Excellent poem, sabrina. very well written...
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Happy Birthday Sabrina. Many many happy returns of the day! May God shower your life with all his blessings and you'll get all the happiness in the life.

May you get joys of life in each and every way,
Here's wishing you a very very happy birthday!

Smile Please :)

Awww, thanks every body, you comments mean alot to me....I appreciate it with all of my heart!!!

Wow, I agree, your best! I'm like amazed how good this turned out! Great job and I feel the same way. 5/5! Keep writting cause i can tell that your very talented! Few I loved it! Take a look at mine it you get any time to!

much love
savannah

ups, it was suppose to say, it's NOT one of my best....The other sounded really selfish hah...

i loved it. i thought it was great..it had a very nice flow!! keep it up...stay strong!! :)

That's a great story!!

I loved the endig=)

Keep writing!!!

Beautiful...and sad...I liked the story behind it even though it's a true story. Once again, take care. I think maybe you should work a bit on the flow of your poems. I've read quite a few and you obviously have a lot of talent, but maybe work a bit more on the flow to make them even better. The lines seem to jump from so many different lenghts. Anyway, very good poem, I enjoyed it. Keep on writing,
SatuzKa

Wow...very good and very sad. Hope everything is going better for you now. -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

its gud u released ur pain thru writing if its on ur life than rem ur promise no more cutting.
u have shown the pain without any artifice which i liked best.
take care

--chavii--

I liked this poem, it was well written and it flowed very nicely. This same incident actually happened to a friend of mine. Hold on, things will get better! If you ever need anyone to talk to you can pm me! Keep writing!

wow.. good job! 5/5!

this is an amazing poem.......but so sad, this poem is filled with so much pain......hope you're ok now.....keep your head up and keep on writin' =) ~hugs~.......let me know what you think of mine if you get a chance, im open to any criticism you might have.....take care

-brittnay- ((5/5))

hey have u read that comment on my kinda man, I was quite dissapointed it wasn't very good :(

You made me laugh by the last comment! :)