Rejected

by The Flame Within   Mar 25, 2005


What is it with this girl
why must she be in my world

i have another girl who i fell for
why must i feel for this girl even more

she told me no, i was rejected
biggest idiot ever, i was elected

i have a new girl, but still it hurts me so
she is a dove and i am the crow

i must forget that girl, who told me no
i have a new love, but i still hang my head low

its not easy being rejected for the very first time
but don't worry, after a few tears ill be just fine

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    AwWwWwWwWwwwWWw.....rejection hurts a.s.s. Lol. I know it does, but don't even cry over her. She's an idiotic moron anyways. She's not worth your tears.

    Another "cute" poem, but also pretty sad. :*-(. Take care my deary.

    (Sorry, I don't know why, but I'm in a really good mood today!)

    ~Sierra